p1

m1

With my improvements for m1 I have changed the font of my text to make it seem more professional and also a different background so the texts and colours of the box’s stand out more. The colour of the text box’s and font are now more effective on catching the audience’s eye and looking as if a lot of effort has went into the work.

On this slide I have re arranged the text and photos so the photos look as if it is  a book opening. Each part of this contributes to the slide looking profound and professional. 

I have used The rest of the slides have minimal corrections which consist of a change in font and the text and font colour and also the picture of the owl I have changed. This makes it seem more fitting and the pictures stand out on the page to capture the audiences eye.

In this slide I have changed the picture in the centre of the slide to make it more appealing and I also added the text which seems more friendly and inviting to the audience.

copyright legal requirements

Throughout the presentation I have various logos and images to help make my presentation look more professional and better presented. The first image I have used in my presentation is the owl on the first page. However I did not create this image I used it from this website; http://www.loripuente.com/book-in-the-works/ therefore I do not own the copyright for this image so I cannot take credit for it. The next logo I made myself is the one who is on the first frame I made the logo look like a book with a pair of glasses this is because this may reflect intelligence and reading which may link to English. The final piece of imagery that I have used is the photo of classrooms around the school and students work. I own the copyright for these images as I have taken them round the school however the images of work is not my own pieces of work it is from English students from Kingswood. 

annotated presentation

Future improvements i believe i could make when looking to develop my project is that i should of give myself an extra slide describing and informing the reader on the English department further such as a list of the teachers who teach the subject and the key subject.

ryan's review

Multimedia Product Review on Ryan Taylor

This project of Ryan’s is fit for purpose as it gives us an insight of the Art Department such as year 8’s work  and it also presents information for students work in 6^th form . It showcases a few pieces of work that students of all ages created. All the media in this text like images relate to Art and learning and is appropriate as everything is related to the department and it is all Ryan’s own creation. The links to the ‘Year 8’ pages and ‘year 9’ sections of the product both work well and all the buttons work well.

Ryan’s project looks very professional and is similar in how it works because everything does what it is supposed to do such as animations working also that it contains information relevant to the department. The colours in the product look good together; because of the splatters of paint which make the background very vibrant and attractive but also relates to the art department.

Recommendations for Improvement would be things such as providing a bit of text to explain what the pieces of art were and to add more examples of students work. The 3^rd improvement would be telling us about the department such as the teachers in the department etc.  The final improvement would be the year 7 and 10’s work so we can see how taking art improves your artistic skills when you take this course and how they develop.